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Song Birds (repost) |
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sarahC Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 84Michigan |
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- the wind howls the moon draws nearer the song birds come out to play time is slowly creeping by in slumber I remain till daylight breaks and I pray for darkness to come again the day slowly fades so lonley so afraid can't go out can't stay in a prisoner I remain trapped by your poisonous love so confused endearing to your soul over and over in this twisted game you play I scream for it all to end yet still I remain as the song birds once again come out to play..... AKA JulieAnn  Julie :) |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Julie I enjoyed this poem very much -- very expressive. ~netswan |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Julie~ Expressive indeed...wonderful writings  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've expressed yourself beautifully in this JulieAnn. It's powerful, yet pleading ... loved this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Extremely powerful and beautifully expressed! Brill, Julie Ann!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Enjoyed the poem. |
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