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sarahC
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since 2000-06-07
Posts 84
Michigan

0 posted 2000-06-30 05:45 PM


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the wind howls
the moon draws nearer
the song birds come out to play
time is slowly creeping by
in slumber I remain
till daylight breaks
and I pray for darkness to come again

the day slowly fades
so lonley
so afraid
can't go out
can't stay in
a prisoner I remain

trapped by your poisonous love
so confused
endearing to your soul
over and over
in this twisted game you play
I scream for it all to end

yet still I remain
as the song birds
once again
come out to play.....

AKA JulieAnn  



Julie :)

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netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-06-30 08:37 PM


Julie

I enjoyed this poem very much -- very
expressive.

~netswan

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-07-01 01:49 AM


Julie~
Expressive indeed...wonderful writings  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-07-01 10:54 AM


You've expressed yourself beautifully in this JulieAnn. It's powerful, yet pleading ... loved this!

Best wishes,
/Kit

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
4 posted 2000-07-01 02:40 PM


Extremely powerful and beautifully expressed!
Brill, Julie Ann!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

5 posted 2000-07-01 05:22 PM


Nicely written.  Enjoyed the poem.
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