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Dawn Eclipse
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The Horsehead Nebula

0 posted 2000-06-29 10:56 PM



On the wings of Pegasus,
'Neath the moon lit sky,
Beyond the rays of the Milky way,
is where my spirit lies.

The evening star shines bright
upon my world so true
The night's velvet sky
allows my spirit to fly.

The veil of the nebula
fills my eyes with wonder
but here upon the earth
my spirit still does sigh.

Upon the belt of Orion,
around the Andromeda,
with the tail of a comet,
My spirit still does fly.



"The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper."
Eden Phillpotts
*Cassandra Roseen*

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Alwye
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In the space between moments
1 posted 2000-06-29 11:13 PM


WOW CASSERS! This definitely describes your spirit, sweetie girl....and with such beautiful words at that!  You go space girl!  

*Krista Knutson*

"We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~

Jamie
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Blue Heaven
2 posted 2000-06-30 12:02 PM


Second from the right and straight on till morning....wonderful poem dawn,,, may i tag along??
jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



Ruby dagger
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3 posted 2000-06-30 02:20 AM


Great Poem Cassers! Space is always a great subject.

Luv

Kelly

"At the right time and place, a question was more deadly than any sword." -Mercedes Lackey

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4 posted 2000-06-30 06:52 AM


DawnEclipse~
If it touches the stars ... I LOVE IT !
It does ... so I DO!
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2000-06-30 07:00 AM


Beautifully descriptive Dawn Eclipse ... I
feel as if I've joined you in the heavens
while reading. Very nicely written!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Dawn Eclipse
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The Horsehead Nebula
6 posted 2000-06-30 12:55 PM


Thanks guys... I love space too... that's where my spirit is, so that's what I like to write about!  

"The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper."
Eden Phillpotts
*Cassandra Roseen*

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