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You Will Come Back To Me
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You Will Come Back To Me |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
If I can believe in love, I know, In my heart, There will be a day To shine my dreams away, There will be no shadows between us We will follows ours hearts, What our hearts tells, I pray for you to return, I pray day and night, Make the things right, I swear, I will keep praying all night, For you to come back in my heart, I know, There will be way for you to come back again, When I dream, I dream of you, Coming back through that door With your open arms, You will keep me warm, when the nights are cold, You will hold me , Never let me go, I still believe There's chance for us, to believe in love, Still believe, we'll surely find ourselves together again, You'll come back to me, One day , My dreams would come true, till then, You will bring my dreams come true, You'll come back to me, Through the open door, I will wait for your return till then, You will come back running to me, You will come back to me, You will come back to me, [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 06-29-2000).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written Vandana.. enjoyed your poem. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Vandana I'm hoping for you. Your poem kind of reminded me of the way some Christian pray...they believe if they think positive and receive the thoughts into their hearts and say it out loud that it will finally come to pass...as to speak it in to existence. I have done this myself many times...many times successfully after a long period of time had passed...but not always. I began to think about the other party...what if they don't really want to come back...and they finally do come back..but they don't really want to be with me...they would then proceed to make my life miserable...perhaps? My first wife told me I would never win her back...she would make sure of that...she had a strong will. What if we are thinking come back...come back..you will come back to me...and they don't really want to..they want to go on with their life. And they are thinking I won't...I won't...I will not go back...never..never. Just some thoughts...your hope is yours to hold on to for as long as you wish....and perhaps you need to believe in Love...James |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Spoken from the heart. I will hope for the best what ever that may be. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
vandana, This was wonderful and full of such hope for the future. I hope your dreams come true my friend. You deserve to be happy. I see you have written with your pen what is in your heart. Nice piece. LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
Vandana, I guess we all live in hope. Your yours are like plea, it is like your holding back, not excepting the truth. An encouraging peice, that just goes to show that we can all do with a little "hope". Loved it! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Superb vandana, this is exactly like a plea. . . sometimes, it's all that we can do. . . hope that we will find the love that we deserve. . . or that it will find us. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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