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The Morning After
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The Morning After |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sunlight streaming through the windows of our room Creating light and shadow across your body in the early morning hours I delight in waking you, with tender kisses, soft touches Words of love whispered in your ear Your eyes on my face, your hands on my body, arouse me As we play in the laughing sun Higher and higher, burning out of control Only your voice whispering my name keeps me anchored to this earth The I shatter into thousands of pieces as your love sets me free Wave after wave of pleasure goes through me Evidence of the love we share Then your gentle touch quiets me and once again we sleep. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ This is just lovely. 'Only your voice whispering my name keeps me anchored to this earth' Oh, yeah !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Ok ... I've heard enough about sleep ... continue |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula~ My husband will thank you later!! This is a great poem to read before bed time, I tell ya!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Who would not like to put themselves in your poem. Me first...lol jamie |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LOL Jamie come ahead.... Marge I enjoy your poems as well and its nice to know I can touch a woman as well as men Rex...ok guy I'll try Sea....have fun HEHEHE |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
What a beautiful poem...so tender Lovely piece Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Tracie...thanks so much |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I am now dreaming though I am awake. This is a wonderful piece and I would love to put myself in this poem as well. Guess I'll have to wait my turn. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I absolutely loved your poem.....I have felt like this only once....maybe again someday...Great writing!!!  Julie :) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
JulieAnn...it will come again because you deserve it Mark...you are first in line...first in my heart...you know that. |
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