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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2000-06-28 10:59 PM


   Sunlight streaming through the
windows of our room
   Creating light and shadow across your
body in the early morning hours
   I delight in waking you, with tender
kisses, soft touches
   Words of love whispered in your
ear
   Your eyes on my face, your hands
on my body, arouse me
   As we play in the laughing sun
   Higher and higher, burning out
of control
   Only your voice whispering my name
keeps me anchored to this earth
   The I shatter into thousands of
pieces as your love sets me free
   Wave after wave of pleasure
goes through me
   Evidence of the love we share
   Then your gentle touch quiets
me and once again we sleep.
  

© Copyright 2000 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-06-28 11:10 PM


Paula~
This is just lovely.

'Only your voice whispering my name
keeps me anchored to this earth'

Oh, yeah !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2000-06-28 11:21 PM


Ok ... I've heard enough about sleep ... continue

SEA
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with you
3 posted 2000-06-29 12:12 PM


Paula~ My husband will thank you later!! This is a great poem to read before bed time, I tell ya!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



Jamie
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Blue Heaven
4 posted 2000-06-29 12:20 PM


Who would not like to put themselves in your poem. Me first...lol
jamie

Paula Finn
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5 posted 2000-06-29 06:34 AM


LOL Jamie come ahead....

Marge I enjoy your poems as well and its nice to know I can touch a woman as well as men

Rex...ok guy I'll try

Sea....have fun HEHEHE

tracie66
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Australia
6 posted 2000-06-29 06:55 AM


What a beautiful poem...so tender
Lovely piece
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Paula Finn
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missouri
7 posted 2000-07-04 02:30 AM


Tracie...thanks so much
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
8 posted 2000-07-04 02:39 AM


I am now dreaming though I am awake.  This is a wonderful piece and I would love to put myself in this poem as well.  Guess I'll have to wait my turn.  
JulieAnn
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9 posted 2000-07-04 04:02 AM


I absolutely loved your poem.....I have felt like this only once....maybe again someday...Great writing!!!  

Julie :)



Paula Finn
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missouri
10 posted 2000-07-04 10:42 AM


JulieAnn...it will come again because you deserve it

Mark...you are first in line...first in my heart...you know that.

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