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Don't Fall
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Don't Fall |
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Ana Junior Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 16iLLINOIs |
You look at me As though I hold the key to your heart. You touch me As if it were the first time you've felt flesh on flesh. You live each day pretending it is your last, But amidst all of your deepened shades of gray You sometimes catch a glimpse of you really are... And you are frightened. You wonder what could have been... And what it someday will be. One of these times, Walking too close to that edge you will slip, and fall into your river of pain. [This message has been edited by Ana (edited 08-09-2000).] |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Very good Ana! It hurts when someone falls into that river..I know I've been there. Luckily I had a friend..some people aren't that lucky...Good work!  stay cool  Lavada |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
I don't think I've had the chance to welcome you to Passions, but welcome! Wonderful writing...I truely enjoyed this piece...such beautiful imagery...keep em coming! Salooma |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
First work Ive heard from you I think. It was very good, I hope to read more. Keep writing, you have a unique style! Love, ,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_., |
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