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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina 
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*Okay, this is a re-post, but It's from Teen Poetry #2 and it's my favorite of all the songs I've written, so I wanted to see what y'all think* My anonymity Makes me what I want to be My own hero My favorite movie star But my rebellious side Comes along for the ride And when I lose it I'm an alien to you What am I trying to say? Would you still love me anyway If I go crazy Lazy Hazy What if I catch fire Desire Inspire you to want me Here I am This is me Welcome to eternity My satin gloves My platform shoes There are those times I find I just Confuse myself Bruise myself News to self 'You're being irresponsible' Your standard honesty Makes it hard for you to see I'm your hero Your favorite movie star Your uncensored words Can't believe what I just heard I might just lose it You're an alien to me What are we going to do? Does it matter to you If I deny you Try you Tie you What if I explode Corrode Unload my mixed up feelings Here I am This is me Welcome to eternity My rose tattoo My black fur coat There are those times I find I just Demote myself Quote myself Note to self 'You're being irresponsible' I am not the one who takes Advice you feel like giving I'm the ever after that You dream of one day living If you still think I'm wonderful You'll never really know me But in the end, if love is real You're gonna have to show me Here I am This is me Welcome to eternity My diamond ring My leather dress Those quiet times when no one knows I Test myself Stress myself Confess to self 'You're being irresponsible' I want to publish scenes And rage against machines I want to pierce my tongue, It doesn't hurt, it feels fine...... *Harvey Danger |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, that was terrific. I really liked it. I think it would make a great song. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Thanks, babe. Like I said, it's my favorite song of mine. It makes me happy. Does that make sense? Hmmmmm......  *~Meredith~* Somebody stop the world, I want to get off! *me |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Wow, great to see a change, i think songs make great poems. And of course theyre fun to read. Put this to music and you got one hell of a song! Keep it up. Love, ,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_., |
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