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NOT the Real Slim Shady
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NOT the Real Slim Shady |
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FeMaLe SeNzAsiaN Junior Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 20 |
NOT the Real Slim Shady I’m sick of your games, so it’s time this should end We can’t make it as a couple, if we can’t be friends So you think this is funny? Well I’m not amused. . . Cuz I gave you everything, and I have nothing left to lose You haven’t picked up your cellphone or bothered to call You only page me when you’re bored, why do I bother at all?? Are you too good to talk to me now? Or are you just getting lazy? And don’t try to get crazy, cuz you’re NOT the real Slim Shady So you’re trying to play me off, is that what you want? Well fine, I’ll pack your things. . .they’ll be waiting out front I know you’re almost twenty-one, and I’m still pretty young But I’m 17 years old, and 4 years apart does NOT equal DUMB!! Are you getting back with your ex? What’s her name again. . .Christy? Go ahead, get with her, sleep with her, MARRY her. . .you’ll still miss me! You’ll come running back again just like last time. . .remember that?! You said you loved me, and after what you did I still took you back! After the tears. . .the screaming. . .the problems. . .the fights Even after you slapped me when you were drunk, I took you back in my life! This time things are different. . .this time if you don’t change I’m walking out that door, and you’ll never see me ever again You can take back all the jewelry and clothes you ever bought me Take back the CDs and gifts, this time you can’t stop me Take back your car keys, and even the keys to your house, too Cuz now I realize that I’m just better off without you I hope you and Christy have a MISERABLE life together. . . And don’t try to get me back, cuz I’m leaving you forever. And you’ll miss me when I’m gone. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Dear God, who are you dating? Charles Manson? Well, I can definately feel your pain here, I've dated my share of jerks also. I really like you poem, the rhyming is very well done. Kick him out of your life, let Christy deal with his sleaziness. You deserve a real man. Great job! *~Meredith~* I want to publish scenes And rage against machines I want to pierce my tongue, It doesn't hurt, it feels fine...... *Harvey Danger |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, sorry to hear about your relationship. I hope everything gets better. Get piece though. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
Excellent work truly... It was awesome. -jessica- |
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thug-a-licious Junior Member
since 2000-08-08
Posts 27 |
Kick him to the curb girl! Let Christy have him, there are to many REAl men out there for u to put up w/ that. Trust me i've been there and done that and it's not worth the heartache! This was a really, really good poem! It was really well written, just reading it I felt your pain ! Your a very good poet really! Keep it up girl! Hope everything works out for ya! Alexis |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem was just amazing and the message is too. I'm sure he's not worth all of the pain he's caused you, congratulations on moving on  |
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Wicced_Witch Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 110Clarksville, TN, USA |
This was a wonderful poem, I could feel the emotion. Who does this guy think he is? You're right to let Christy have him..He doesnt deserve you. Stephanie |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
wow this is toughy....so much pain definatly! i just hope you can coup with all that and get rid of the jerk...(opps sorry)! Anyways good luck and keep writing... Salooma |
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Ana Junior Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 16iLLINOIs |
Wow...I loved your poem, and I hope you continue to write more and share them with us. I know a few guys like that...I have gone out with a few guys like that too and they all ended up in the same place~dumped and forgotton. Don't sell yourself short! ~*ana*~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hey again Dang...im with Lyric..who in the hell is this guy? All i have to say is...you go girl. you dont need him if all hes gonna do is drag you down, and that sound like what hes doin. and i know this poem is old so im sure youve alrady taken care of everything..but just throwin my 2 cents in ~!*DQ*!~ "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
Cool Poem! I liked how we finnaly tell the guy's no more of this ****! I hope that wasn't your experience. See you later! Catherine! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Ahem... right here!! I also echo Lyric's sentiments. I didn't have a Charles Manson, but I'm pretty sure I was with the guy that initiated the texas chain saw massacres... hehehe Hon, this guy is lower than dirt to be putting you through any of this. Just because he is older, he believes he can run you, or control you. Please lose the jerk before you end up on Jerry Springer... Very heartfelt writing, I look forward to more. Ps. Maybe if I'd pay attention, I'd know this post was 4 months old, oh well! I hope my advice was appreciated anyway!! xoxo Jenn< !signature--> "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 12-07-2000).] |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
AWESOME! You said everything in this poem I have ever want to say to a guy. Bravo! Get rid of him. You are better off with out someone like that. |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
dang girl... sounds like this guy doesn't even deserve the itme of day from you!!! lose him fast!!! no guy is worth all that pain, but it is a great poem keep it up ~*Pixie*~ |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
Help me! I need to know how to post my poems. Please anyone tell me how I can! Catherine!!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Catherine, just in case you're still wondering.....click on NEW TOPIC at the top right of your screen. Anyway yea.....in or this case click it right next to POST NEW..or something........just make sure you click on NEW TOPIC. Anyway this poem was great....hehe.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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