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turn the page and close the book |
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Angel christmas New Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 6 |
You past away on a lonely friday and I didn´t even get to say I love you, that you mean everything to me broke my heart into a million tears and now I´m drawning from inside Every hour is longer and longer and my heart begins to hunger can´t give it the love that it misses so much can´t reach out to feel your touch wish I could hold you close These lonely nights brings back the sad memories that I carry wihtin´ my soul theones I can not let go, feel it´s time that I should turn the page and close the book Yours faithfylly Brian |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Brian, this is very good. It always hurts terribly to lose someone we care so deeply for. I'm sorry this has happened to you. Nice writing, I really felt this. P.s...Welcome to our humble home!! xoxo Jenn< !signature--> "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 12-06-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions Great first post here! I think you did a good job of putting these feelings into words. I hope writing helps you make it though the tough times. I hope you enjoy it here and nice job on the poem  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions! I hope you enjoy your stay here....keep your hands and feet close at all times. Good poem and i surely hope to see more of you around!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Welcome to Passions!!!it was a very good first post....hope to see more Regina aka Ina |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!! This was a great first post. I definately cant wait to see more!!! Welcome!! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Angel Christmas- Welcome to Passions!! We're so happy you've decided to join our little 'family of friends'... This is a wonderful place, and I'm sure you're going to love it here.. What a beautiful and heartfelt piece you've chosen for your entrance... You have expressed these emotions so gracefully...I can't wait to read lots more from you... Check your e-mail for a special welcome. *smiles* ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
Brian: Good Job and Welcome! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Welcome to Passions! This is a beautiful first post. It's so hard to lose someone you love, and it's a long time before you are able to turn the page on that time of your life. Don't rush it. Thanks for posting. I hope to see more! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Great first post.I'm sure you have heard it all when it comes to your loss so I will just say I'm sorry. Keep posting because it helps get things off your chest. Jon |
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