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Angel christmas
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since 2000-12-06
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0 posted 2000-12-06 07:41 AM




You past away on a lonely friday
and I didn´t even get to say
I love you, that you mean everything to me
broke my heart into a million tears
and now I´m drawning from inside

Every hour is longer and longer
and my heart begins to hunger
can´t give it the love that it misses so much
can´t reach out to feel your touch
wish I could hold you close

These lonely nights brings back
the sad memories that
I carry wihtin´ my soul
theones I can not let go,
feel it´s time that I should
turn the page and close the book

Yours faithfylly Brian

© Copyright 2000 Angel christmas - All Rights Reserved
Jenn Cirrincione
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1 posted 2000-12-06 11:46 AM


Brian, this is very good. It always hurts terribly to lose someone we care so deeply for. I'm sorry this has happened to you. Nice writing, I really felt this. P.s...Welcome to our humble home!!
xoxo
Jenn
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"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??


[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 12-06-2000).]

Lakewalker
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2 posted 2000-12-06 04:24 PM


Welcome to Passions
Great first post here!  I think you did a good job of putting these feelings into words.  I hope writing helps you make it though the tough times.  I hope you enjoy it here and nice job on the poem


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3 posted 2000-12-06 04:37 PM


Welcome to Passions! I hope you enjoy your stay here....keep your hands and feet close at all times.

Good poem and i surely hope to see more of you around!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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Ina
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4 posted 2000-12-06 04:49 PM


Welcome to Passions!!!it was a very good first post....hope to see more
Regina
aka Ina

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5 posted 2000-12-06 08:51 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!

This was a great first post. I definately cant wait to see more!!!   Welcome!!  

vlraynes
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6 posted 2000-12-06 09:27 PM



Angel Christmas-
   Welcome to Passions!!  
   We're so happy you've decided to
   join our little 'family of friends'...
   This is a wonderful place, and I'm
   sure you're going to love it here..

   What a beautiful and heartfelt piece
   you've chosen for your entrance...
   You have expressed these emotions
   so gracefully...I can't wait to read
   lots more from you...

   Check your e-mail for a special welcome.

   *smiles*
   ~vicky



  


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Hallie_Angel
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7 posted 2000-12-07 04:52 PM


Brian: Good Job and Welcome!
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8 posted 2000-12-07 06:15 PM


Welcome to Passions!

This is a beautiful first post. It's so hard to lose someone you love, and it's a long time before you are able to turn the page on that time of your life. Don't rush it. Thanks for posting. I hope to see more!  

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



keoni
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since 2000-10-16
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9 posted 2000-12-07 06:49 PM


Great first post.I'm sure you have heard it all when it comes to your loss so I will just say I'm sorry. Keep posting because it helps get things off your chest.
                                          Jon

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