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I'm Your Living Shadow....
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I'm Your Living Shadow.... |
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Kyle Finn Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 36Linn, MO USA |
Do you see me standing behind you? Feel me walking what can you do? Nothing you can't even see me standing there, Or flowing thru your silky hair. I'm your shadow falling away, My life lead astray. Do you feel my presence? Can you stand my essance? It's the same as yours, Feel my existance, I'm somewhere in the near distance. Feel my anger, I'm just some stranger. Hear my crying voice, I leave with you the choice. Listen to my song, Freedom is what I long, Let me be free, Then maybe you can see. The person who is your living shadow..... |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
i really liked this one of yours...the way you wrote it and the idea you presented are very interesting....thanks for sharing it! salooma |
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