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Should You Trust Me?
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Should You Trust Me? |
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Kyle Finn Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 36Linn, MO USA |
Who am I why am I here? It isn't them that you fear. Where did I come from where did I go? Tell you cuz you must know? I think not, Just a tiny dot. Then why do you fear something so? Where will yo ugo? Fear you that's funny, This is how I make my money. Say you're not scared, Venture toward me no one has ever dared. Your life to me isn't even a grain of rice, You're my next sacrifice. Do you dare challenge me? Fool open your eyes and see. You can't win, Crush you like a piece of tin. Destroy you and leave nothing dismay, Now that you can't feel your body, What the hell did you say? |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I've loved all your poems so far but this one has to be my favorite.Kepp up the great work! Lauren |
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Kyle Finn Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 36Linn, MO USA |
thanks that means a lot to me  ive liked yours so far well the ones ive read anyway |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
well this definatly had tons of emotion poured into it, but all i could see was confusion. keep up the great posts! salooma |
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