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My Light, My Love
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My Light, My Love |
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Broken_Heart Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57Netherlands |
My light, my love... I sit quitely To watch the evening sky You are beside me And we joined hands Gently we kiss Sweetly I tell you You are my light, You are my love I caress your lips With a tender kiss Just so I know that I am not living in a dream You are my angel Send from above You are my light You are my love I drift away with you Into a life of bliss With you I feel happy I am not alone You have made me feel That I had forgotten How to love And how to smile I love you You are my light You are my love... - dedicated to Ellenoor - Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within... |
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FoXyGrL009 New Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2 |
WOW! I'm speechless...that is SUCH a good poem!!! It tells all about love and the feelings of it!!! I hope Ellenoor...I'm guessing is the person you wrote it for....I hope she feels the same way about you!! Keep writing!!! *<3*FoXyGrL*<3* [This message has been edited by FoXyGrL009 (edited 08-05-2000).] |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Your poem make a lot of sence to me about love and that's why it's such an awsome poem.Keep up the great work! Lauren |
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Lone Insomniac Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 45 |
Hey uhmm... kweet niet echt wat jouw naam iz... maarre ik wou even zeggen dat het een mooi gedicht is... normaal heb ik het niet zo op liefdesgedichten, maar ik vind deze wel mooi...vooral omdat ie voor een goede vriendin van me is...(elly) groeten... Lone Insomniac |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
That poem was so beautiful, your so lucky to feel that way, I hope you dont take it for granted because the minute you do.. the minute it ends... Trust me my friend... It happened 2 weeks ago to me... -jessica- |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
That certainly is beautiful! And very sincere. I don't think I got the chance to welcome you to passions so welcome! And I hope to read more of this great work! Salooma |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was great! ~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~ |
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