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The Way Things Are
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The Way Things Are |
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Kyle aka Huck Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63Linn, MO USA |
This is the way it is, Should it be my life or his? Should it be my life or yours? All my life been nothing but tours, Tours of tearful memories. Saw a lady killed, Her blood spilled. Sand now red, Wait no thats my head. Beat and carved, Later on I starved. Star on my arm, Damn it wheres the alarm?? Funny looking 'E' on my shoulder and left hand, In a pool of blood i stand. Now it shall be this, Your life turned into an abyss. A new leaf did I turn, Revenge in my heart does burn. Take a look inside, You can run and you can hide. If you cross my path, I'll make sure you feel my wrath. Give and you receive, Cherish every breath you breathe. Scriptures on the wall, Those who betray all must fall. Now this is how things are... |
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Lone Insomniac Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 45 |
Hey !!! man this poem really rocks !!! I think it's way cool !!! It's much better than all those boring love poems at this site !!! and it really means something...just don't know what.. =) hehehe...well keep up the good work..it's better than mine... |
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Kyle Finn Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 36Linn, MO USA |
thanks man glad ya appreciate it....oh this is Kyle aka Huck btw |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
that was an excellent poem... -jessica- |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Welcome to Passions! You know the werid thing is I made sense of all this....and usually I can't. Great style and use of words to portray confusion (if I'm right). Anyways I like the way you but this out there, as you said "this is the way things are.." great job...keep it up! Salooma |
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