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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-08-04 04:54 PM

You know everything about me,
Between us, there are no secrets.

I've told you of every tear,
And every smile that has formed.

Every little crush,
All of my secrets.

You know every feeling,
That I've ever had.

You’re the only place I can turn,
When I'm unsure about my life.

You have never turned your back,
At just the tyme I need you.

Through the years you’ve been stained,
From the tears in my eyes.

You know about my crush,
When even he doesn’t know.

I can tell you everything,
And you won’t laugh.

Everything I hide,
I share with you.

You have never laughed,
When I fall in love

You’re the only one to listen,
When I have tears streaming down.

Somehow writing it all down,
Helps the tears go away.

(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- Poetic Bliss 82)

*A poets mind never rests, It is always dreaming*

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

1 posted 2000-08-04 09:48 PM

Hey there, I loved the poem. It is true. The journal never laughs, it seems to be were every girl writes about her problems, love lives, friends, and social life. It is a very interesting place. Keep your head up. Keep up the great work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

Isabelle
Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 176
Indiana

2 posted 2000-08-04 10:11 PM

This was a good poem. Your so right. I don't keep a journal though i use my poetry as a way to tell what's going on in my life. I hope to see more of your poetry. Keep up the work.

Jeanna

"Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."
~Voltaire~

Lovely_Kris
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

3 posted 2000-08-05 12:36 PM

I realy like this poem. I think it is wounderful keeping a journal. I like writting my problems down on paper. I hope to read more.
Lovely_Kris

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

4 posted 2000-08-05 02:47 AM

This is an awsome poem and I hope to read more of yours.I don't keep a journal but maybe I should.
Lauren

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

5 posted 2000-08-05 03:42 PM

tamma~~~this is a good poem...i used to turn to my journal for my problems but i just couldnt do that...i couldnt keep my thoughts in my head and in a book that anyone can find a read...but i like the way that you wrote this...

~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~

~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

6 posted 2000-08-06 01:01 AM

Def a great poem as always Tamma! I know how keeping a journal can really bring you up when you need it! I've kept one for two years and I feel exactly like you wrote...I also looked back at it and you can see how much you've changed in a few short months cause it holds all the secrets you have. Great post!

Salooma

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