Teen Poetry #3 |
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There'll Never Be Another Me |
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FeMaLe SeNzAsiaN Junior Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 20 |
There'll Never Be Another Me Promises broken, chances blown Bitter tears and feelings thrown Phony smiles and broken hearts, Something's tearing us apart I can't leave, but I can't stay And I can't believe these games we play What is it that we did wrong? Because all the happiness is gone Before you turn to walk away, And say those things I know you'll say Take one good look at what you see There'll never be another me Quiet stares and empty words A cry for love that goes unheard Painful silence, angry eyes Emotions that can't be disguised The laughs and smiles have disappeared There's no doubt something's missing here Things are changing, by and by In ways we can't ask how or why Confusion's hitting more and more What exactly are we looking for? Before you leave and don't come back, Before you run to where someone else is at Take one good look at what you see There'll never be another me |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Wonderful poem, and I like the way you use the title throughout the poem. Wonderful job again. Kittie |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
wow!!!this is very impressive...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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DancinQueen![]()
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Okay~i dont even know if ure still in passions. but im replying to all your poems ive messed over the last months cause you're BY FAR my favorite poet in all of Passions and i absolutly LOVE your work! Please keep posting! "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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FlipAngel Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 46Prior Lake, MN, USA |
Wonderful poem! Great use of rhyming and powerful emotions. ~Rachel~ ~*Yesterday is gone, let go of the past; tommorrow will bring new hope to grasp*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think you did an excellent job on this poem, I like it a lot ![]() "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this poem was really great. Tons of talent within you. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was absolutely great!! And your right...there will never be another you!!!! Great poem hun ![]() |
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DancinQueen![]()
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
just bumping one of my favs ![]() ![]() |
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