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The Sweet Bitterness of Love
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The Sweet Bitterness of Love |
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Squirter Junior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 17Minnesota |
From the moment we met, I knew we'd be friends Some even said, "Together 'till the end." We started as friends, but then it was more, The years between us, only four! This secret relationship was such a thrill, I always thought, "We'll make it...yes...we will!" Then there were parents screaming "NO, YOU CAN'T!" It all started to become an incessant chant. Those first few days apart, there was so much pain, How could this happen? We had so much to gain! The months have flown by, I said I'd call, But it hurts too much to face it all. How will this turn out? Happy? Sad? Some things are good, others are bad. Not matter what happens or what we do Remember this: I will ALWAYS love you!" Love Always, Nicole |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
i give this 2 thumbs up!!! i really enjoyed it...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Great job, keep your head up. Sometimes what happens now will change later on. Kittie |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
I really liked this one. And if you're destined to be with this person..fate will bring you together again =) But remember what hurts us only makes us stronger. Atleast i think thats how it goes =) Keep writing! i like your work.. ~!*DancinQueen*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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