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Fading Me Away
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Fading Me Away |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair 
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I look outside my window and all I see is gray I turn to the mirror and see myself in dismay This world is too hard to follow or figure out Sometimes Im happy but mostly Im always in doubt These mood swings destroy a part of me one at a time But what am I supposed to do? Im not a mime I have to unleash all my emotions and give them life Can't act like Im not what I am thats just false rife And Im feeling the heat and I cant handle it no more Sometimes I feel like Im being ripped out from the core This pain I feel makes me suffocate in my own mistakes Rub my nose back in my affairs, I dont need high stakes Dont remind me of my past, its gone and I never won I wont reminisce or think about what I should have done I want to erase all of my past and begin a new future Until then Ill live my life to the fullest and mature It's fading me away, far away, but Im sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark. ,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_., |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
In a word. Life. You my friend, are trapped in the same dynamic, insane and sometimes plain sick life we all are. Trust me, the past is best left where it belongs. Kicking your self now does nothing. Just make note of it and pray you don’t repeat your mistakes, but if you do…just remember not to be too hard on yourself. Your only a caged animal, like the rest of us poor fools. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey* I LOVE your work. And this poem is awesome...gives a great message. Live for tomorrow, the past is exactly what it says.. past. Keep writing i love reading your poems** ~!*DancinQueen*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Misty Blue Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44 |
Hey, this is my first time reading one of your poems and I must say I'm definitely not disappointed. Stay Tru, keep it up |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Wonderful poem, I absolutely love it. "little by little I see you die, nothing I can do, nothing I can try" That was what I wrote in one of my poems, life is really mean and ruthless (hope I spelt that right), and it just seems to keep on kicking you down when you think you are up, but like you said, we will sketch ourselves back. Keep up the good stuff.  Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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