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NO is a perfect word in a time like this!!!
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NO is a perfect word in a time like this!!! |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
I picked up the phone and heard the voice that I love so well But this time was different, I was in shock and suprised No one had been in an accdent and no, my favorite shoes weren't on sell My friend just told me something that made me think, a lot I didn't know what to say, for the first time ever I was clueless, freaked and wierded out She read me a little poem about what she just had did about 10 minutes before She was mad at herself, and felt like a whore As for what she said, she didn't know why she did it He was there and she was there and he talked her into it They didn't do as much as he had wanted but enough for her to get excited I feel bad, for not knowing what to say, all i could ask was why? She didn't know and either did I All she was sure of was she did didn't have feelings for this guy, but she did the stuff anyway I don't know what to say, and I never will All i really do have to say is next time use a perfect word.. NO If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Very good. I don't really know what to say. All i know is sometimes it is really hard for people to say no. I also think when people try talking you or someone you know into something you should always make the right choice. That is all I have to say and I hope your friend get's better. Lovely_Kris |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
Cutie -- I like this poem first off. More to the point of the poem though, I understand what your friend went through. To make a long story short last weekend I went over to this guys house that I didn't really know and while he was hot, that was it. I had no feelings for him. He tried everything to get me to do things with him and I wouldn't. He used lines like, "I'm too much of a man for you." or "Fine, just be a little seventeen year old girl." While I didn't do stuff with him, I can understand the pressure your friend must have felt. Tell her to keep her head up, and while we all make mistakes, learn from them. After all the mistake she made is hardly life threatening. It will get better. Great message in the poem though, I think the word "no" is not one teenager really comprehend. Love, Crystal |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Your poem is so true and it really applies to life.Keep writting such awsome poems so I can read more. Lauren |
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