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TrueLUV
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-08-04 01:14 AM

Hey sweet thang you told me it would last
But all those empty promises are all in the past

You said you'd never leave me lonely you'd never leave my side
But all the things you said were full of nothing but lies

I remember when that night you cried to me, but babygirl that ****
won't work with me

My friends have told me how you torture men inside make them empty promises and fill there world with lies

You shatter there hearts and steal away there soul, but remember this babygirl now your all alone

[This message has been edited by TrueLUV (edited 08-04-2000).]

MeLScHneD
Junior Member

since 2000-07-28

Posts 11

1 posted 2000-08-04 01:28 AM

Hey...that was a GREAT poem! that was a good way to express your feelings!!! I know some of us girls can be like that...but don't get your hopes down...because there are sweet ones that care out there too! and guys can be like this too! hehe! but its still an AWESOME poem! and i loved how you called her babygirl! keep writin! keep an eye out for the good girls!

*<3~MeL ScHneD~<3*

Misty Blue
Junior Member

since 2000-05-24

Posts 44

2 posted 2000-08-04 02:20 AM

Damn, I really feel that boy TrueLUV. Yooh kool cause you got you're own style, "babygirl". Anyways,Stay Tru and keep it up.

SweetPoet17
Member

since 2000-08-04

Posts 108

3 posted 2000-08-04 02:25 AM

beautiful sweetie

Babygirl... I like that... hehe... Well anyways hun, keep your head up... whats meant to be, will be and although it seems like forever adventually we will meet someone who sweeps us off our feet............................ someday.........

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2000-08-04 12:07 PM

trueluv~~~this is good!!!i enjoy reading your poems so you better keep posting...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

5 posted 2000-08-04 09:36 PM

Hey there, great poem. I loved the intent of it. Keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

6 posted 2000-08-05 01:54 AM

Your poem was awsome and it makes a lot of sence.
Lauren

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