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Time for me to move on
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Time for me to move on |
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*ChrisLover* Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 46erie, colo |
When i see you across the hall/ I look to see who's standing beide you/ she's pretty but not very tall/ and seem's to like you too/ I don't know how to tell you how i feel/ In fear of loosing such a friend/ In hope that my heart would in time heal/ I worry that my broken heart would never end! [This message has been edited by *ChrisLover* (edited 08-02-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
welcome to passions!!! i hope that you enjoy it here as much as i do!!! i like this poem...i am sorry that you feel this way...but we all have at one point in our lives...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
 And a standing ovation to my dearest friend Janette!!  hehe. Hey sweet heart! Glad to see you here! welcome to the family! Well, about the situation...All I can say is keep your head up ok? You're such a doll and I'm not going to let that boy hurt you. love ya bunches hun!!!!Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ *~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Definitely keep your head up, and don't let a broken heart stop you. It's gna hurt, but keep going. Great poem, and the rhym really works. Kittie |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
ahhh welcome to passions! wish you luck with your situation! great poem really! salooma |
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*ChrisLover* Junior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 46erie, colo |
hey guys! thanks for the comments! i really apriciate it!! well i wrote that poem in the middle of last year.. and i did keep my head up and now im back with the guy ... yes his name would be chris!! we've dated off and on through the school year ... but i got what i wanted i am, FINALLY ,im with him. through all those bad times we had, we only got closer!!! so thanks guys!!!! love ,Janette Everything happens for a reason.. sometimes it's bad, but sometime it's good!! just remeber there's people out here who care! |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Great first post. Good luck with this guy. Nice poem Bel |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions ChrisLover! This is a great first post. It's often hard to know when it's right to let someone know how you feel ... I hope things work out for you! (check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!! Great first post. I really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the great work and I hope to read more. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Misty Blue Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44 |
Hey,Thanks for sharing your talent with us.I really feel you, hope you stay for awhile.Stay Tru and keep it up [This message has been edited by Misty Blue (edited 08-04-2000).] |
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