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The Unloved |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A 
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See how deep you can go with this one. The Unloved The vibrant glowing around us all projects our worth. Demanding to be seen by all who feel our enchantment. Delivering love, truest in form through care and compassion and truth to any hearts with shades of blue who know just who we are. Who we are is simply what we do. We befriend, we share, we sacrifice. We are those less shared upon... less sacrificed for. But as the endless lives we touch become more endless, we've found bliss in ourselves and eachother. With that revalation discovered, our love will go no longer... unloved. Jeremy D. Halstead 6/16/00 "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Jeremy, I havn't read anything of yours that I didn't love. This is truly exceptional, and I somehow feel like its all about me, or I'm about it, or something, or nothing, or all of it at the same time. jason |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful piece, my friend. I'm glad that you see the true value of love. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Jeremy- That was really good. You should really keep up writing, becuase you're really good at it. Bel |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
first of all you got my vote and i rather enjoyed the read glad you see the up side of things not everyone can do that. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey, that was very beautiful again. Thanx for the email. I actually felt like you were writing about me. Can't wait to read more. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Jer~well, I told you I would get to it, it just took a little while and I hope you forgive me!! anyways, this poem is simply magnificent! I've never known a person such as you who had such a way with words! Please continue to amaze me with each and every word with each and every line with each and every stanza, and finally with each and every poem!! Keep it up my hubby~Love Always~*~JeSsIcA~*~ ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Well, Jeremy, indeed we are unloved. As long as we continue to find joy in the love and appreciation of our poetic peers we will cease to be unloved. Great job!!! TAP2 |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
JEREMY this is probably one of the best poems that i have read of yours...actually its probably one of my favorite...keep up the good work buddy... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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BabyGirl1 Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 91Morris, IL |
Great writing Jeremy! It goes very deep. SOmetimes we are all the unloved. So many times us poets are neglected and underwritten. Our true worth is only seen through the eyes of those just like ourselves. Yet, if we continue to find love and strength in each other, one day we will all be loved as we love. |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
This poem is great, your obviously very good at this. |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
This poem is great, your obviously very good at this. |
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**AANGELLE** Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 45 |
This was a fabulous poem which I really enjoyed and I love a lot of your poetry. Keep up the great writing and remember that we all love you and your poems here in Passions!!!  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Exceptional Jeremy ... you dug deep for this, and it comes through beautifully! Wonderful writing and sentiments! Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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buttercup411 Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41miami, fl, u.s |
this poem has such beauty in it...... and it's a great piece, love the way you put words together |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
BEAUTIFUL |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Not many words can be used to describe what a wonderful poem this is. Kittie |
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