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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
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It's hard to find the Rythenm to this one but if you do it reads like a song. Enjoy... aint nothing working aint nothing right there's a hole in me that I can't fill no matter how hard I try aint nothin sweeter aint nothing wrong the pain that I recieve keeps me strong it keeps me moving on "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
A certain amount of pain does keep one strong...very well done!  *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I know what you mean about pain I go through a lot of it every day but everntually it should get better. |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
great song/poem. it's very nice...i guess i could kinda get the rythem to it sorta. but your words are absoulutly true and that's what makes it such a great piece. salooma |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Thank you all Alwye ~ That's so true, and at this rate I will be the strongest man ever TopGunLauren ~ we all Have times when the pain feels over-whelming but your right it does get better Salooma ~ Thank you so much. Unless you heard it read once it is heard to hear the rythem but I am so glad you enjoyed "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
Hey I really liked this one. I could kinda feel the rhythm. Do you ever write songs too? Or just poetry? Just wondering. Keep up the good work.....Tara |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Very nice. I liked this one. Keep writing Bel |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I just like to say... I broke many rules here. Well only one but a big one. I didn't write this, but I just really wanted to share it... so if a mod reads this I'm sorry but could you please delete this I regret posting it. Jason |
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