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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
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I know life is short but stilll I waste it I need to wake up and start to embrace it I said this before but I want to say it bolder every day that passes I get one day older life was a gift so what will I give back? I don't know yet but I think.... I'm on the right track |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a very refreshing poem! Its nice to hear someone say they want to live life to their fullest. Embrace each day and make the most out of it! Wonderful!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked the format of the poem. It kept me reading because some poems just bore me with their everyday line after line after line kinda thing. I like your little diagonal shifting thing. Anyway......the poem itself was positive and nice. great job!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
xShUg..~ Thank you for the reply. I delt with a coupl of deaths lately and my own mortality has been on the back of my mind lately. Just don't want to go w/ any regrets... ya know Dopey~ Thank you as well. I must confece. I picked up this style of writing from some one else, but it is unique and I like it and use it in most my writting. I know the poem was a little crued but it's been a while, I'm a bit rusty. Thanks for replying any how |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
wow...wonderful writing. i loved it!! salma |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
What a great attitude, we should go through every day as if it were a special gift. The end of this is great!  "life was a gift so what will I give back? I don't know yet but I think.... I'm on the right track" "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
thank you. you are both very kind |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Awwww. This is bittersweet. So sad that you dealt with facing your own mortality, and yet so important as well. Beautiful job on this!! *hugs* Jenn "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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