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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
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It use to be, a smile from me was just a mask But today, when I smile it's not such a task Today I smile, because it's beyond my control Today I smile, because I feel wonderful "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ "I am, who I am and what you think, I don't give a damn" Chilli Peppers |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
AWESOME~! Take a bow  LOVED IT! LOL You have no idea..i couldnt have said it better myself. im the EXACT same way. I smile ALL the time...and i used to do it to hide how i really felt, but now i feel wonderful and i love to smile  Keep up the Gr8 work!! ~!*DQ*!~ "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
great poem I liked it a lot. it is unusual to find something like this here. there's normally so much negativity. |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
I loved the style, it was creative...I'm happy you're always smiling because it really rubs off on other people. "Never frown, because you never know who is falling in love with your smile." |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I loved this poem...I'm so happy that your smiling uncontrolably!! How great!! But keep on smiling!!! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
  This was great "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea this was great. Something so simple as smiling can often be so complex at times of depression. Glad to see all is well.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent Isgona! What a positive poem, much enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Thank you to every one that replied, for their kind words. I know I don't reply as much as I should but you are all great writters in this forum, so the fact that some of you like mine makes me fell pretty good. IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ "I am, who I am and what you think, I don't give a damn" Chilli Peppers |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Awwww Jay, this was just the sweetest thing. It's great to feel just pure, uncontrollable joy! I hope you feel it all of the time. Jenn "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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