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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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It was just last month, I was rejected. Then he suprized me, he said he loved me. But if he loved me, why'd he reject me? (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom) |
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mickel2995 Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 48 |
I totally know where you are coming, from. It seems from the experiences I have been through, "love" is jsut one nasty game and you never win. One day he hates you, the next he loves you, one day it's this girl the next your still his girl. It's so hard, but I have learned to not give up, just stay strong and eventually one day, it'll get better. One suggestion I have though, elaborate more; otherwise, this is great! |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
I have to say I don't understand why guys do that stuff. They aggravate me so but i keep going after them..lol. Well i do have to agree with mickel elaborate more..otherwise it's good. Jeanna  "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
I really like it, I think every girl can relate so well to this. But I think I have to disagree , I like it the way it is. I think you said a lot with really few words. Great Job !~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow "Driftwood" |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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