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I'm sick of being judged
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I'm sick of being judged |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
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In responce to MeLScHneD's "I'm so sick of guys" MeLScHneD~ I'm sure your words came from hate but I believe men get judged to much. Over the years many judgements have been made and as soon as one see's the slightest case of this it's so easily said that "men suck" so... I don't mean to affend any one just had the urge to write this I'm sick of girls who judge me with out a word spoken they think they know me with out a word spoken she begins to doubt with out a word spoken she knows what I'm about she knows I don't care cause the last didn't dare she thinks I'm less then dirt cause the last was such a flirt I'm SO sick of being jusdged |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
sounds like the girl judging you is a really jealous one...who cares what other people think or say...they just say it cuz they are jealous...keep up the good work girl... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, I know the feeling. I don't have a lot of friends that are girls because they are two faced mostly. Just keep your head up. It really doesn't really matter what they think, mostly how you think of yourself. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
great poem.....don't worry though...your gal will come around and realize you aren't what she thought. |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
thats a great poem man i know just how you feel iv delt with stuff like that a lot |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Great comeback, and definitely very true. Keep writing. Kittie |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Thank you all. sorry the poem itself is not that great (I wrote it in about ten minutes while I was quite angry), but I feel I get my point across. Thanks again for the comments, IsGona ps ERIN ~ thanks for reading but "keep up the good work 'boy'" would have been a bit more appropriate. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Alright, alright! I am guilty of the "men suck" thing. Although I do see your point, and it's not fair to judge, you might see where a girl who's been burned numerous times may feel a little hatred for men. If a dozen girls had hurt you, you be a little leary of a relationship. Sometimes men are great.... alright, extrodinarily so.  But, sometimes, they suck. That's the way life can be, and that sucks, too. Keep writing buddy. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Ahh. I prolly take this to far. But it is a major pet peeve of mine. Stereotypes in general really annoy me. Thanks for replying. Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Amen brotha!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
I love this! i agree with you(yes i am a girl) that guys get judged... it's like that old cliche "one bad apple ruins the whole bunch" welli hope you kick that girl in the head and knock some sense in her! LOL j/k great poem *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I'm sorry! I too am guilty of the 'men suck' thing. usually I only say it in jest to one of my friends (usually a guy), but when I'm angry I mean it. I know that most guys are sick of the whole stereotype thing, and I am too. I mean, (I don't want to be conceited or anything, just using this to prove my point) guys flock to me cause they know that I'm not two-faced (unlike most of my chick friends), and I give them a chance before I say that they suck. So, girls, stay cool. Treat the guys with the respect they deserve (I know that Rob's mother loves me like a daughter 'cause I'm his first girlfriend who treats him with respect. Treat the guy good, the mom loves ya!! ) I like the poem. It got your point across quite well.~*Skyfire *~Always Canadian*~ ~*~I used to be an idiot, but I'm all right now~*~ |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Ok well here I am to save the day... ok maybe not... but just let me believe that and we will all be fine!! Guys and Gals... most of us discriminate against the opposite sex at some stage. I guess it is more that we all have a bad expereince with them and we generalise and say that "All" guys/girls are stupid, annoying and we hate them, when really we know that this is a generalisation and that it is only a selective group that we don't like. We can all understand that people get hurt though by others saying these things and we probably shouldn't say them, but there are a lot of things we probably shouldn't say!! I hope we can all work this out!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Virgil Junior Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 43Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Ah, true words of wisdom from the mighty Melster...we salute you! woohoo!!  "By other ways, by other ferries, not here, shalt thou pass over: a lighter boat must carry thee." "I AM CANADIAN!!" |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
simplistic poems seem to get the message across alot easily.. and thats what you did, so dont be ashame that it was quick... and i can agree with you about the subject, i enjoyed this one a lot! ~JDR "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
guys rule!!!  girls rule too!!! he he heUnfortunately, both groups happen to have thei own share of bad @^%$#*^. So let's stop generalizing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
ok "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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