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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Sitting here Thinking of you Wondering what it is That i have to do Feelings are mixed Nothing feels right Desire and Passion Mixed with Sadness and fright You sent chills down my spine The brighten my day Spin me around pick me up Turn me the other way Dont know where im going Dont know where i'll be Cant continue being sad Dont see any signs of being happy I'll know when i get there I hope it wont be long I need to set myself on the right path After following one thats been wrong all along [This message has been edited by xShUgArHiGhx (edited 12-30-2000).] |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
All I can say is this: Even though it seems to be the hard choice, it's most often the right choice. I wish you luck in your decision.  ~*Skyfire *~Always Canadian*~ ~*~I used to be an idiot, but I'm all right now~*~ |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
wow good poem lots of emotion in it and well happiness you will find in the one you love for true love is only happiness with a new name. "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
short lines of nice words came out of this one, I liked it a lot and the effects of love are grand ~JDR "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hopefully it all works out for you in the end shugar......another great read by you.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This is sad. Very hard to be so mixed up and confused like this, isn't it? I'm sorry, but at least poeple like us can express our heartache through writing. Good luck... xoxo Jenn |
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lilpoet Member
since 2000-12-30
Posts 55Dallas,Tx |
This was very good. I hope to talk to more later on! And I also would like to hear more of your poetry. ~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~ |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
The hardest decisions to make are quite often the ones you are most thankful for later... I hope that everything works out for you!! Great poem... look forward to more!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
awww sweet P lol  Are things really this bad? I know everything's so confusing with Ron..oo am i allowed to say his name on here? sorry...neways. girl you need to talk to me! ive been through this whole thing before...u arent alone, dont forget that. and HAPPY NEW YEARS!! talk to u later babe*dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
If this person, is playing with your feelings, you need to send him off. I hate mind games  I personally believe that if i really care for the person i'm with, i wouldn't do anything to hurt her. so much to the point that i'd wish to carry her burdens for her so she can always be happy. So, I believe that other guys do feel this way too if they really care for the person they're with. Bottom line, they won't hurt em. good luck I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yeah, nicely done on this poem, I like how you wrote it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
The idea in ur poem is wonderful to me. Lovely! "Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world" |
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