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Enchanted Star Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 14New Port Richey, FL |
There is a light A bright shinnning light Buring rays tough my soul as do to you This light connects us In a way not even the angels above can explain You are apart of me You are in my soul You are in my heart I love you You are my light at the end of this forever darkening tunnel.... CindyLuC |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
wounderful I think this is a great poem. I liked the way you expressed your true fellings. I hope to read more of your work and keep up the great work. Lovely_Kris |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
wow that was really good!! keep up the great work!! Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~ ~People R supposed 2 B luved, and things R supposed 2 B used; most of our problems stem from realiTy: Things R luved and People R used~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
ohh how sweet...i wish you the best with this guy...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey nice work. I enjoyed it very much. I hope to read more. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
great poem! i really like your work keep up the great writing |
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FairyPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 25 |
That was a really great poem. It showed lots of emotion, I hope things work out with you and him. Keep up the good work. Jess |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Cindy, you're a good poet. I'm almost ashamed to have my stuff posted in the same forum as your's. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Wow! Great poem. im looking forward to reading more of your work "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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