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Real Love ? |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair 
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I only met her for a couple of days And I cant describe the feelings that came my way What do I do when a girl lives so far? And I can't reach out to her like a star Do I visit or do I forget? Theres no way I can ever regret The times we spent and the laughs we share Now I miss you too much to bare Tell me why, please give me a reason What do I do now that it's a new season? I want you to know how I feel about you truely But its all too complicated and I don't want to disturb thee I just cant seem to grip all these feelings And now Im confronted with all these dealings I'll take advice or anything you have to give As long as it makes this hurt Im feeling no longer live Im way too far to go back to what it used to be So I have to share these words to all that can see Im only a plane away but it seems so hard To relive the feelings that we once jared Now I have to say good bye until we meet again And hope that your as sweet as when I met you then These words don't begin to describe what I feel But for now It's good until we become real |
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mystique Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 22 |
This is a great poem. Don't give up on what you are feeling. Take the chance, and keep it alive. It might disappear if you don't act now. mystique |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
really great, emotional poem that situation is definately very hard i hope the best for you good luck |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Beautiful, emotionable poem. The rhyme works very well, and brings out a true kind of, old fashioned love, no offense, just something that sounds more like true romance. You can never forget that feeling, whether you try or not, but the days do get easier. Keep up the great writing. Kittie |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
dont let go of your feelings...keep up the good work...i wish you the best of luck... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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