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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
maybe you wont get this poem if you haven't see Velvet goldmine or if you dont have the same friends and intrests as me but i like it and i wanted to post it. i dont usually post in here, usually it is in dark passions bu this poem isnt dark so here it goes: Strawberry breezes and black kisses Tie-dyed shirts and messy hair Days I'll never forget Moments of unconsiciousness and hours of smiles Pot smoke and vodka Ways to forget and some one to forget for Warm fuzzy feelings and heart beats Pass a J and share a smile peach orchards and flashlights Smiley faces and snakes "Damn it Matt, this isn't a sleep over any more" Glass beads and little racoons Kurt Wild and Brian Slade On 40/20 at 4:20 with 4 friends and a 20 (and dont give me crap about smoking pot i quit that **** a long time ago but the memories surrounding it will never fade) "There is no always forever-just this-R.Smith broken glass never cuts the way it should-Gin |
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mr0001 Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 39 |
i can't say that i have any clue what you are talking about, but the way you wrote this was an excellent way to let people see what it is you are reminising over. good job.  mr  "crazy" is just who you are...amplified. some people draw the outlines in life, i chose to add the color. |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
I love it! I love it! This is an awesome poem. I know the feeling, I myself have many happy memories with friends that I will cherish forever even if some of them has betrayed me. Keep up the good writing.  Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Of course I don't catch all the 'inside jokes' in your poem, but I still think it was funny, and I really like your style. Peace out, kidd-o. *~Meredith~* If I could read your mind, What would you say? Would it take my breath away? *Human |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
I think this is great. A warm feeling of friendship. Keep it up. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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liqwidnik Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 33Mantua, NJ, USA |
i don't get it completely but I like it. Keep it up |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice poem Ginners......but your little parenthesis at the bottom of your poem displays some sort of attitude....chill out lady, apparently nobody gave a CRAP whether you did pot or not. ANYWAY........i loved the poem, thought it rocked.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
In this day and age... nobody cares what the other is doing... there are soo many people who smoke pot and domother drugs that it is hard to find people who don't do it... Each person is free to their opinion an free to do what they want with their lives, it's a free world!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
go dopey! this was a sweet poem, i enjoyed reliving your memories ~JDR "A writer doesn't acquire a vacancy of mind, but rather a inadequacy of words." - Jeremy D. Raulinaitis |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
ahhh memories... nice job. I bet "Damn it Matt, this isn't a sleep over any more" has a funny story behind it. "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm gonna have to agree with Dopey. I liked the poem alot, great style. it's just that the words in the buttom kindda bothered me a bit. But, oh well......nice post I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I dont know where nikky found this poem it is really old i barely remember some of the inside jokes. well thank you for having something to say, and by the way the words at the bottom are there because i have had people on passions say things about smoking pot that upset me and i wasnt in the mood to deal with that again |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Interseting......I like it. Good poem. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
No prob havin them there, but they just kinda sounded snappy.....full of attitude. But i can see why you'd put those there....just do realize we are young adults with feelings. You snap, I snap. haha....that's how it goes...But we're all a great bunch of poets, and so are you.....peace is a virtue i strongly recomend. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is a little old and I certainly don't get all of the inside jokes, but it's still good. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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