Teen Poetry #3 |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada ![]() |
Im back everyone....hope this poem works... Dear you, the pain you caused me will never fade away. I need to hurt you back for lying to me. when they come and take you away from me, am I still suppose to love you?! you tell me you never lied, that everything you say is true, then why do they tell me you arent who you say you are! G-ddammit! i gave you my heart! i gave you everything! I told about everything from broken hearts to my abusive childhood! You took advantage of my heart and my already shaky life. Do you want to fall over and never get up? am hanging on with on one finger and i'm finally gonna slip! and all you can say is "i never lied to you" i want to hurt you!but more than that I still want to love you. If they're wrong I swear I will never forgive them or myself, because right now all I can think about is all the good times! so dear love, I will stay your darling angel until time ends, but if u are still lying to me than you'd better forget i exist and forget that we ever existed. Good-bye love until we meet again. Regina |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
I liked this a lot. It gave me goosebumps. ![]() |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
simply powerful i have to admit, its almost a bit too harsh but it works well with your anger cant wait to read more welcome back ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Ina nice to have you back. This was pretty sad and I hope this is not about Brad. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
thank u all, for your replies. Jeremy- hell im pissed off beyond belief. im glad it works. Greeneyes-thats what i felt goosebumps Javier-i thought he loved me!:'( i dont know what happened it just happened fast. talk to u later. Regina |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Woah. Very deep. I'm sorry about what's going on... I sorta know what it's like. You're doing the right thing, though... I'm not making much sense, am I? ![]() ~*Rhonda "I am Canadian" - Joe If you set limitations upon yourself, it's no wonder you fall short of your dreams - Rhonda J. Adolph |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
wow... this is very powerful, i could feel your emotion throught the words. i hope everything gets better, no one deserves to go through this kind of pain ![]() ![]() ~*Justine*~ |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Rhonda- it sux big time doesnt it? Justine-ya your right no one should have to deal with this. thank u both for your replies Regina those who love us,will always love us.those who hate us,may g-d turn their hearts,if he cant may he turn their ankles so we can see them by their limp |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
This poem definetly worked...I loved the way you set it up as a letter. I'm sorry that this happened to you and I really hope everything is better soon. |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This poem was great...I hope everything works out for you and gets better. Good job! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very strong words you use here, your emotions really show in this one, great writing. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Allan Riverwood![]() ![]()
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
A simple solution reveals itself-- show HIM that poem, and see if he understands. I know what it is like to be in a relationship based on lies, almost a fictional love. I was once at the lying end myself, and i regret it now. Reading this poem brought back some memories for me. Thanks for stirring up my emotions a little. ^_^ |
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