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Enchanted Star
Junior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 14
New Port Richey, FL

0 posted 2000-07-30 01:22 AM

"Falling Into Me"

Falling into me
Moving closer to hear my breath
To feel my heart pounding against your chest
Look into your eyes
An ocean of passion
Waves of lust
Chills down my spine
Waitng for your every smile
Floating through time
I hold my breath
Waiting to exhale
As you hear me....
Falling into you

CindyLuC

Jose Marti
Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 374
washing DC

1 posted 2000-07-30 01:46 AM

WWow, very nice poem. You are pretty good at this.
You have captured that feeling exactly. I'm impressed

sherm
Member

since 2000-07-21

Posts 94
Evansville,IN

2 posted 2000-07-30 03:01 AM

very good i really like the way you capture your feelings in your poems

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-07-30 12:45 PM

i have only read two of your poems...but they are soo good...keep up the good work...ill be looking forward to reading more...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

mr0001
Junior Member

since 2000-06-09

Posts 39

4 posted 2000-07-30 03:17 PM

wow....i think that is all i can say! great poem! i can't wait to read more of your work

mr

"crazy" is just who you are...amplified.

some people draw the outlines in life, i chose to add the color.

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

5 posted 2000-07-30 04:02 PM

WoW, you are what I would call talented. Awesome poem. I loved the last line! Be cool.

*~Meredith~*

If I could read your mind,
What would you say?
Would it take my breath away?
*Human

FairyPrincess
Junior Member

since 2000-07-26

Posts 25

6 posted 2000-07-30 06:20 PM

Wow! that was a really cool poem. keep up the good work, can't wait to read more!

Jess

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

7 posted 2000-07-30 09:21 PM

WOW! that was soo awesome. you have great passion for writing. keep up the great work!

~!*DancinQueen*!~

"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

Lovely_Kris
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

8 posted 2000-07-30 10:30 PM

I think you did a great job. I think you did a great job. I hope to read more of your poems.
Lovely_Kris

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

9 posted 2000-07-31 09:42 AM

Great poem. Keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

10 posted 2000-07-31 09:45 AM

thanks for sharing this piece. it is truely exquisite.....beautiful

Salooma

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