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sherm
Member

since 2000-07-21

Posts 94
Evansville,IN

0 posted 2000-07-23 12:53 PM

i catch myself waking up
and sitting there holding you
it feels like a dream
and i wonder if its real
is it true
could it really be
all i know is how i feel
happier than ever before
all because your with me
and i love you with all my heart
everything about you i adore
you brighten up each and every day
your smile touching every part
and your love leaves me speechless
with absolutely nothing to say

i wrote this after spending the best week of my life in florida with my girlfriend

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

1 posted 2000-07-23 03:17 PM

Truly heart felt Sherm! Haven't seen one in a while. MOst of them are all about heart ache, and I suppose I understand why...when I'm hurting, I can find more words to describe my feelings, than when I am in bliss I'm just overwhelmed and can't find words to explain my feelings. Anyways, kudos to your work and to you and your girlfriend. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

*~* I wIsH I wAs A
LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn;
SkInNeD kNeEs AnD
bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE
eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a
BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Euclid the Kid
Member

since 2000-07-15

Posts 51
Eugene,Oregon

2 posted 2000-07-23 10:27 PM

Sherm,
Because so many things don't work out- or to our liking --it's really great when you can feel that specialness of an almost right out of your dreams, love. I am very happy for you and the lucky object of your affection.

Dean

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-07-28 03:56 PM

sherm~~~i am really happy to hear how you feel about your girlfriend...it makes me smile cuz i feel the same way about my boyfriend...i wish you and her the best of luck...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

sweetstuff101
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

4 posted 2000-07-28 04:03 PM

that was wonderful, i know that feeling it is great, well NEwayz i liked it alot.

Luv,
~*~sweetstuff~*~

~People R supposed 2 B luved, and things R supposed 2 B used; most of our problems stem from realiTy: Things R luved and People R used~

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2000-07-31 09:12 AM

Nice writing... good work! Love is foriegn to me... but I wish you the best with your girlfriend.
Jenn

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

6 posted 2000-07-31 09:17 AM

Sherm, once again nice poem. Keep up the good work, and I am glad you have found someone to share your life with.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

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