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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
things will go wrong they always do thats not pecimistic its just true cause thats life ups and downs times of smiles and others with frowns good times leave you happy bad times leave you scarred good times are easy and the bad ones so hard but i wouldnt cover the scars or hide them in the past im keeping mine and they will always last theyll never go away forever here to stay i need them to remember and help me live each day they are a part of me without them i wouldnt be the same life might have been easier but it would have been lame they make me who i am so dont bandage me im showing them off for everyone to see i wrote this because everyone goes through hard times and wish so badly to make them stop but once you reach a place where you are happy you realize how much the hard times were worth it and wouldnt change anything |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
OH WOW!! That was soooo awesome! You express yourself in such a mature manner. WONDERFUL poem...and i really like the meaning behind it. KEep up the great work! Can't wait to see more |
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FairyPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 25 |
That was such a great poem!! there was so much meaning behind it. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more. Jess |
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FoxyGirl Junior Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 17 |
Hey, That was an awesome poem. Luv how you express yourself. Keep writing more poems. I can't wait to read them. Jenn |
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Euclid the Kid Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 51Eugene,Oregon |
Sherm, How true, how true! You show here the wisdom which only comes from experience-how long have you been enrolled in the school of hard knocks? Dean I seek to be me- and all I can be! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
wow sherm...this is a good poem...keep up the good work... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderful positive poem, and attitude Sherm! Loved this!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Sherm, once again wonderful work. I enjoy reading your stuff so much. It brings a smile to my face. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
This is such great work! You definatly got my vote! I believe so much in those words you wrote that it makes me happy just to see that someone acknowledged these wounds. Thanks for sharing it! Salooma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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