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the crush |
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crazy4her New Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 3 |
The Crush When i found out you were my crush, I got this tingling feeling like a rush. When i looked into your eyes so blue, I had to have you right then i knew. For weeks and weeks never showing my true emotions, For fear of causing a big comotion. Finally I said the words "i love you" Feeling like a fool they came right out of the blue. Now here we are somewhat together, myself only wishing it would last forever. but now as I conclude,the only phrase i hope you say is "I love you too" |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Very sweet ending and very beautiful piece of work. Keep up the great work. Kittie |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
really nice, sweet poem keep up the good work |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Crazy4Her! This is a very sweet and sentimental first post ... I hope they say "I Love You" too! Hope to read more! Check your e-mail for a special message. Best wishes, /Kit |
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FairyPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 25 |
that was a really sweet poem. keep up the good work and i'll keep reading. Jess |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
What a woundeful piece and I also think this piece was sweet. I really hope to read more. Keep up the great work. Lovely_Kris |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
welcome to passions!!! i hope that you enjoy it here as much as i do...nice first post...i hope to see more by you... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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