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My Best Friend (its really short)
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My Best Friend (its really short) |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ 
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The girl I call my best friend, will always be there until the end. Together we have been through thick and thin, if competing in a race we wont care if the other wins. We have been in plenty of fights, but we patch things up, making it all right. She has been there for the past 4 years, she is someone I believe truely cares. ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Erin, I am glad to hear that you have a friend like that. Don't ever ruin it. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Said from the heart's simplicity... such words are never short... regards to you Erin, Sudhir |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
chel~~~thanks for your reply...we stopped talking once for a long time...and just recently we started talking again... sudhir~~~i never thought of it that way...and your right...thanks for taking the time to reply... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Gregory Junior Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 22Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, United States |
That was a great poem ERIN, seems like you friend really means a lot to one..I hope you guys stay friends 4ever..Good luck and keep writing! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I'm glad you are able to right this poem. There is nothing better than a good friend. |
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FairyPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 25 |
ERIN that was a really good poem, like all the others i've read by you. its nice that you have such a great friend. I hope you stay friends forever. keep up the good work. jess |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was really sweet, i am glad that you have found a friend like that too. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
thanks for all your replies...sweetstuff welcome to passions... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I am sure your best friend will always treasure this, Erin. It was very nice! Elizabeth Why ME??? |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
elizabeth~~~i am sure she will to!!! but she knows that i treasure our frienship...she is one of the only girls i trust... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
very good. I really enjoyed that poem. I hope to read more. Lovely_Kris |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Erin, nice poem. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work. |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Erin, nice poem. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
kris and jose~~~thank you for your replies...they really mean alot to me... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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