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Dean
Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 120
Canada

0 posted 2000-07-28 05:16 PM

                    As Dusk's Become Dawns

                          As dusk's become dawns,
                               I think of you.
                        You sparked something in me,
                          that no other girl could do.

                              Iv know you for,
                               very little time.
                     But you have done one thing for sure,
                 made me want to turn back the hands of time.

                             Set of to show you,
                       that you are beautiful and unique.
                               You are a saint,
                          with a heart that runs deep.

                          I don't want to scare you,
                              your just to true.
                           I just want you to know,
                    As dusk's become dawns I think of you.

"Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)

mr0001
Junior Member

since 2000-06-09

Posts 39

1 posted 2000-07-28 10:10 PM

good poem...i'm glad this person has impacted you in such a way...we all need love

mr

"crazy" is just who you are...amplified.

some people draw the outlines in life, i chose to add the color.

sweetstuff101
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

2 posted 2000-07-29 12:38 PM

that was great! keep up the good work!

Luv,
~*~sweetstuff~*~

~People R supposed 2 B luved, and things R supposed 2 B used; most of our problems stem from realiTy: Things R luved and People R used~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-07-29 03:27 PM

this was a good poem...i am really glad that you have someone in your life that made such an impact in your life...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

4 posted 2000-07-29 05:16 PM

Great poem, and obviously great subject as well. Nice writing on this.

*~Meredith~*

If I could read your mind,
What would you say?
Would it take my breath away?
*Human

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

5 posted 2000-07-30 04:35 PM

This is a nice poem, and you sure are lucky to have some one like that.

Keep up the good writing.

Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach.

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