Teen Poetry #3 |
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If She Says... |
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Euclid the Kid Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 51Eugene,Oregon |
If at first she says NO ask her again and again, often it's by persistence defeat can yet yield a win. If she says,"I'm hurting!" just hold her in your arms, words aren't always nedded to ease the troubled alarms. If she says , "Slow down, boy you're moving way too fast." be kind and considerate if you want it to last. If she says, "I like you" that is an open door, let her see you at your best-- and she'll like you even more. If she says, "It's over!" don't think the world's gonna end, be grateful for the times you've had and the freedom to start over again. |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
cool poem i really like what you said there |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
are you one of those guys that dont give up till you get what you want??? well you sure seem like it...if a girl says no she means it...if a girl says im hurting then she must be...if a girl says slow down then thats what she means...if she said goodbye you must have done something wrong... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great poem. That's very true. This was well written. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Real cute, but don't get over confident that you have solved the mystery of the female mind. Because we can still surprise you. ![]() *~Meredith~* And now I live In a world I call my own, It's always nice when no one's home.... *Lit |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
This poem is very peacefully put together. Keep up the great work. Kittie |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
I really liked this poem. You seem to think you've got us girls figured out, but i like what Meredith had to say. keep up the good work. Tara |
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