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Another Day and Night (my 300th)
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Another Day and Night (my 300th) |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A 
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I've shed my mask for you...here I am....enjoy...me. < !signature-->Another Day and Night He spreads apart his eyelids. Staring nervously into the blur. He already begins to fear. Frightened by the day ahead and then the night he'll find. He's not even crawled from bed... but still he wants to cry. He falls away once more to dream of something else. Something besides his day. Something with a happy ending... or doesn't end at all. Something with fulfilling love that doesn't have to fall. He peers awake once more. His neck and back so hurt. His feet now find the floor. He know this day will turn to night before the work is done. Then night bring along the pain for which there is no sun. The pain of being here again. Beaten and alone. Another day that turned to night before his work is done. Another night that turns to day dwelling in the fear of another day and night without three words he needs to hear. Jeremy David Halstead 7-25-00 "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." [This message has been edited by Jeremy Halstead (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
 Congratulations on your 300th post Jeremy!!! What an excellent poem you've penned to celebrate this milestone! I loved the ending ... keep up the wonderful writing Jeremy! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
Great poem Jeremy. Not that I've ever read one of yours that isn't! Keep writing and have fun.Love ya Danielle It takes a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like them, a day to love them, and a lifetime to forget them. Dedicated to: MD |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great poem. Keep up the good work. Congrats on the 300th. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
JEREMY I LOVE YOU!!!!!!! There, now you've heard those three words and you don't have to hurt so bad. I know it's not the same coming from me, but you know I'm not lying to you. Come hang with me in open. jason  Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
~~~CONGRATULATIONS~~~ what can i say??? i love your work...you amaze me more and more with every poem you post...all i have to say is...would you want to hear those 3 words from anyone??? or would you rather wait for the special girl in your life to tell you??? keep up the good work stranger... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
Everyone needs to hear it whether it is from that special one or not. I love you Jeremy and so does God.  A big ~CONGRATS~ on the 300th poem.  Gossamerwings ;) |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Hey my love! It's been a while! I miss ya kid. Please try to call me when you can. I had a phone card but lost it, so I need to buy a new one. oops  I hope that you'll call me. and just remember that I LOVE YOU! Now feel better knowing that I love you because it's an honor, you know that I don't love too many people. Keep your head up my love!! and call me darn it!! LOVE YOU!! Love Always~*~Jess~*~*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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Euclid the Kid Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 51Eugene,Oregon |
Hey, this is great Jeremy- and a great way to mark the beginning of your next 300! Dean |
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Gregory Junior Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 22Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, United States |
CONGRATULATIONS That was cool poem, Jeremy..I really enjoyed readng it..keep up the good work! P.S. I got a little private dancer to help you celebrate..lol..Good Luck!  |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Wow, really great poem! The ending was very beautiful, in a sense that I can't really explain. Congrats on the 300th post, keep up the wonderful work. Kittie |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Wow! What an awesome poem. Another wonderful piece of art Jeremy, and a wonderful 300th post as well hey May the next 300 post be even better than the last. Keep writing the good stuff Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
This is one of the best poems i've ever read in my entire life and i will continue reading your work from now on. congrats on the 300. Tara |
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