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I Shouldn't But I Do
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I Shouldn't But I Do |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA 
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*I Shouldn't But I Do* I shouldn't feel like this you shouldnt be the one i miss I shouldnt see you in my dreams but you're all i ever see it seems Everything reminds me of you I wonder if it's the same for you, too I know its not, you hate me 'cause we fought It's not my fault i swear I didn't want to hurt you 'cause I still care Why am I apologizing here? you caused all my tears I gave you my heart and all you did was tear it apart I just want to get over you! why is it so hard for me to do?? It's driving me crazy how i feel I can't get you outa my head for real I guess i'll just never forget "our" moments... like our first kiss and when we met* **This was about a previous relationship and how i got screwed over but i still care about him soo much and i dont know why and it drives me crazy! |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
that was a really good poem i know just how you feel, been there one too many times but i like to think if its meant to be it works out and if it doesnt work out its not mean to be its hard now but eventually someone great will make you forget him good luck |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Good luck forgeting him. It was a very nice poem. I hope you'll write many more like this, I'm looking forward to reading more. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
ever heard the saying: it only takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone and a day to fall in love...but it takes a lifetime to forget someone...good luck trying to forget about him cuz the littlest things will make you keep remembering him... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Thank you all for replying! Erin~ Yeah i have heard that. And i used to have it in my aol profile =)but nothing will make me forget him better then time |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
So what, have you been reading my journal? Because I am in the EXACT same situation and have been for almost a year! It seriously sucks. All I can say is I hope you fall in love again with someone nicer, smarter, cuter, funnier and perfecter. (that is a word, ya know..) Peace babe. *~Meredith~* If I could read your mind, What would you say? Would it take my breath away? *Human |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions DancinQueen! This is an emotional first poem ... straight from the heart! Nicely penned ... hope to read more! Check your e-mail for a special message. Best wishes, /Kit |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Kit~ Thank you so much for the card! It meant alot. Thank you all for replying! I plan on posting another poem soon~! ~!*DancinQueen*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
There is only one reason why you can't forget him. It's because you actually care. And there is nothing wrong with that. I know this is an older poem, so i hope you're feeling better  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Well, this was a great first (even though it was a while ago) It really expresses your fellings well, great writing."Why am I apologizing here? you caused all my tears I gave you my heart and all you did was tear it apart" |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Lakewalker~~> Yeah it was awhile ago lol i can see how my poetry has progressed, too ~!*DQ*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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