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My Prince Charming
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My Prince Charming |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA 
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*My Prince Charming* I know you're out there, I'll find you one day. Maybe I try to hard, what else can I say. I wish you'd come to me, things would be easier indeed. I wouldn't be so desperate, you would love me for being me. Why am I writing this poem, I don't even rhyme. I'll just sit here and hope, that you'll come in time.* --This was just a lil thing i wrote in my journal when i was frustrated..nothing big "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
actually this is something big...its your feelings...do they mean nothing to you??? i like this...one day your prince charming will come and get you and it will be the best time of your life...by the way it rhymes pretty much... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
I liked it! It's good. Don't worry about the guy, I know that sounds hard, but he'll eventually find you. Keep writing Bel |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
You've been writing in your journal for a long time haven't you. It shows. you're a very good writer. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was lovely DancinQueen ... keep writing in your journal. I still love to look back at mine, and see which fantasies came true (and ps ... it rhymed just fine  )Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
This is a very cute poem. I really don't know the equivolent of prince charming is in female form. Maybe I'm just looking for Snow White. Either way, good luck and keep it up. Jason  Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
It's very cute....and I think every body's been waiting for prince charming! why does he take such a damn long time! Salooma |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is sooo cute  talking about being really personal with your poems. Very different indeed. "Why am I writing this poem, I don't even rhyme. I'll just sit here and hope, that you'll come in time.*" I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
HEY OK so maybe this is a little cute.. its pretty old. like from the begining of the year. thanks for bringing it back acire!love always ~!*Kiley*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I liked this one, it's simple but deep, great use of words |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Lakewalker~~Thanks for replying. I always look for your replies cause you seem llike older, i dont know..like its good to have u reply to my poems, i dont know how old u are, but thats just how it seems! im weird i know "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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