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Teen Poetry #3

You are everywhere

Broken_Heart
Member

since 2000-07-24

Posts 57
Netherlands

0 posted 2000-07-28 10:00 AM

As I am still a teen I thought I might aswell post a poem here too... I wrote this love poem for my single love... Hope you enjoy it!!!

You are Everywhere...

Wherever I turn
Wherever I look
I see you standing
You're everywhere I see
You are in the air I breathe
In the water I drink
In the sky above
In the moon beneath
Where I stand to wait
The day we meet...

Maybe a dream
Maybe it's true
My heart captured
Only by you
Where are you now?
I long to know
I feel you're near
Wherever I go...

Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within...

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

1 posted 2000-07-28 10:32 AM

Beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-07-28 11:18 AM

oh wow...do i like this poem...keep up the good work...and ill keep reading...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

sweetstuff101
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

3 posted 2000-07-28 03:47 PM

i really liked that, i think it is awesum.

Luv,
~*~sweetstuff~*~

sherm
Member

since 2000-07-21

Posts 94
Evansville,IN

4 posted 2000-07-28 05:29 PM

great poem really shows some deep feelings i hope everything continues to work out for you

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