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My Heart
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My Heart |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
It was a whole filled with love It seems I fell in and out of love Pieces of my heart quickly faded away I have seen couples my entire life I said I want that When I have it I throw it out My heart is no longer stable Looking for something to lean on It turns to you You hurt me I turn away My heart was broken What do you have now Except pieces to my heart "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ouch, sorrow and angst... well written poem from the heart, Chel... regards, sudhir |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Nice job. Keep up the great work and hope to read more. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
chel i am really sorry to hear that this guy did this to you...my heart goes out to you...one day you will find someone who wont break your heart...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
beautifully composed! you write free verse so well. the part i liked best: "I have seen couples my entire life I said I want that" good work! Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Great poem Iam sorry to hear that the guy treated you so bad I hope you find another love  keep on writing its beautiful |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Chel, your heart is beautiful. I feel your pain, and hope that the pieces come back togethor for you. Keep the chin up and life, well it will just keep going on. Might as well do what we can to enjoy the ride. jason  Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
that was a great poem im sorry you got hurt like that but i hope you can get over it soon and feel better and keep writing of course =) |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
First of all I want to thank everyone who has read the poem or is about to read it. I am glad that I have touched people with all of my poems. Sudir~ Thanx for the reply Lovely_Kris~ I am glad to see that you enjoyed this Erin~ Thanx for the support Ethan_Halo~ I am glad that you took time to read my poem, I enjoy your work so much, I only hope you do the same for mine. TrueLUV~ I only hope that there is someone for everyone out there Jacman~ I am sorry that you have experienced the same thing. I hope the pain goes away soon. Sherm~ I was happy to hear that you enjoyed this piece. Everyone thanx again for reading my poetry. I hope everyone enjoyed reading it as I did writing it. Everyone keep your heads up. Luv always, Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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