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Don't Look;Just Leap
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Don't Look;Just Leap |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again 
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*this an old repost from back in the day. i'm running a little short on the creativity and so i hope this helps to wrok up the inspiration... =) enjoy. oh, and special thanks to blink.* Dont Look;Just Leap Maybe there’s no way out of hell, But it’s a war I have to wage myself. You’re the reason I’m even here today. I’ll love the pain when these memories fade. I wanna go back and relive the dream. I wanna block it out; wanna hear you scream. Is it something that I’ll regret? Or do I want what I can’t get? If you can live with all my faults, If I could return a couple of calls, We wouldn’t need so many walls. only cry when the angels fall… Maybe there’s no way to love this face. Or see these arms as a resting place. Could be a fear to commit or of love that’s true, or a teary smile that sparkles so well on you. But you’ll never know how much I feel. We’re not ready for something so real. Is this something that I’ll regret? Or do I want what I can’t get? If you can live with all my faults, If I could return a couple of calls, We wouldn’t need so many walls. only cry when the angels fall… Maybe there’s no way to move on, Or erase the masks we both drew on. But that can’t be true; no moon’s full forever. If I’m on the last rung, then it can only get better. I’d sell my soul to bring you to me. Then again, perhaps we’re where we’re s’posed to be. Is this something I can’t get? Or do I want what I’ll regret? If you can live with all my faults, If I could return a couple of calls, We wouldn’t need so many walls. only cry when the angels fall… < !signature--> Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. [This message has been edited by Ethan_Halo (edited 07-27-2000).] |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, I thought this was a beautiful piece, keep up the good work. You will find someone to hold in your arms believe me, there is someone for everyone even me, so keep your head up. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
Ethan -- I really like this poem. Then again, I like all of your work. I love the fact that you talk about a love lost and take the blame for it. I think that is a common emotion of most people whenever they a lose a love . .. Good work. Love, Crystal When a door closes, another door of oppurtunity opens. The only problem is that most of us are so busy looking at the closed door that we fail to see |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Nice poem Ethan. Let her go, you'll find another soon enough. Keep your head up. |
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