Teen Poetry #3 |
To Be |
Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
To be with you is why I get up To be with the one I love I have been blessed to have you To be happy with my life To be heard I have been blessed to have you To be loved To be liked I have been blessed to have you To be me To be yours I have been blessed "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
what a wounderful poem. I really enjoyed your poem and keep up the good work. I also hope to read more. Lovely_Kris |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
chel i am really glad that you have someone in your life like that...keep up the good work...i am very impressed... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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FairyPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 25 |
chel,your lucky to have someone that special in your life. I loved the poem..keep up the good work, I hope to read more. *Jess* |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was wonderful, i really liked it! |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I am really happy that you all enjoyed it. I hope to get to everyone else's poems too. Keep your heads up and work hard. Luv always, Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
a wonderful verse about counting your blessings. =) well done. it's good to be thankful for the little things. the little things make up the big things. and sometimes, loved ones are both. Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
wow, nice poem Michelle. I enjoyed reading it. |
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Euclid the Kid Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 51Eugene,Oregon |
Chel, it's nice when you can get to that place in your life- it seems there are so many dead end before you find something so wonderful--keep counting those blessings! Dean |
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