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Teen Poetry #3

Take Love Slowly

Gregory
Junior Member

since 2000-07-25

Posts 22
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, United States

0 posted 2000-07-27 09:17 AM

"Take Love Slowly"

It's been a while now that I've had these feelings I feel,
If it's possible girl let's make them real

Everytime I see you, my eyes open and jaw drops,
I get cold-feet and my heart just stops

We've been friends for a while and I want you to know,
That we should start a relationship and see how it goes

We've been to the level of being just friends,
let's take another step and never let it end

You've known me for days, months, and years,
I want to be there to whipe your tears

Being with you is a dream come true,
The only person I want to be with, is definetly you,

You're my morning sunshine, night and day,
and I'm here because I want to say

I'm tired of being without you and feeling lonely,
let's be with eachother but let's remember
"Take Love Slowly"

Gregory

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

1 posted 2000-07-27 12:08 PM

This is the sweetest poem I've read all day. Very good job, way to make MY heart stop. Peace dude.

*~Meredith*

And now I live
In a world I call my own,
It's always nice when no one's home....
*Lit

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-07-27 02:13 PM

this poem is very impressive!!! i like it alot...keep up the good work buddy...you got my vote...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Martini
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-07-27 03:00 PM

this was great!!

one of my favorite reads today!!

keep it up my friend

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

4 posted 2000-07-27 03:09 PM

lovely poem here Gregory...

very sensitive sentiments I see ...

regards,
sudhir

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