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Those Times |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ 
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~Those Times~ I think of all the times, that you made me cry. And all those times, you told me lies. If you didnt want me, then why were you here? Was it because, you knew that I really cared? All the times, that you made me smile. Those were the times, your love was worth while. If you really wanted me, why couldnt you show me love? You should have acted like an angel, sent to me from above. Those were the times, which are now in the past. My time with you, never did really last. ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Check it out, I got here first. Anyway, memories do have a way of haunting us long after we try to forget. I just hope that you can create new ones to overpower these that give you pain. Good luck!! jason  Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
jacman~~~what can i say you special...=@) yeah i know what you mean it haunts you...its not really that...its that you just cant forget about it too...you know what i mean...thanks for replying... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
another really good poem its definately hard to let go of memories the best way that iv found is to just move on and make new fun memories to take their place |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
sherm~~~my feelings for this guy are gone now...ive found someone who likes me for me...not to see how far he can get with me...but it is hard to forget about him... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Gregory Junior Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 22Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, United States |
He Erin, That was a beautiful poem, and I really enjoyed reading that! Good Luck in the future! keep up the good work!  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
thanks for the reply gregory...the tweety really made me smile!!! 8>) ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is wonderful Erin! The rhythm and rhyme flow very nicely! Much enjoyed your tender thoughts in this!  Best wishes /Kit |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
A very real poem which we can all relate to. Wonderful expression, I hope you heal soon.  *~Meredith~* And now I live In a world I call my own, It's always nice when no one's home.... *Lit |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Unfortunately I can really relate yo this poem.I'm sorry that this guy had to hurt you, but I'm glad that you found someone who cares and I'm glad you shared this poem. Best regards IsGona |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
thank you guys for you replys!!! ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
delicate and tender is how I would describe what I read... nice work ERIN... regards, sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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