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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
i wrote this one after breaking up with my ex while she was trying to convince me there was still a chance the cornerstone is cracked the capital has been sacked theres nothing left its all gone away there was a theft nothing left to say we're all out of gas we've spiderwebbed the glass ive got to stick to my guns i just cant come back couldnt take me with the Huns not going to repack the boulder was crushed to dust the walls have fallen to earths crust the sun has set thine maker has been met |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
nice poem!! i completely understand where you are coming from!! nice work!! It is better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Well done! Boy ... there's no turning back after that one Sherm! Great imagery!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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