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Sweet Lullabye
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Sweet Lullabye |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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This is to my dear sweet; Jeremy..twisted as it may seem, you are my beautiful dragon that helps brighten my soul in the darkest of night... My pet dragon Looms and Lurks among the mists of my imagination He's purely manifested from the depths of my soul When I'm all alone in the dark He sits at my bedside Holding my hand, wiping away my tears and crushing my fears Whenever I wake from a startling dream My dragon, wraps me with his soft dragon wings And begins to softly whisper a sweet lullabye within my ears He softly kisses my cheek as he watches me fall back asleep Once I begin to snore and finds everything safe He disappears back to his hiding place Asleep for an eternity Until my darkest hour of need and my heart begins to bleed Then back at my bedside he resides Wiping away my tears and crushing my fears And soothing my soul with a sweet lullabye < !signature--> "Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night" ~Crash and Burn~ [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (edited 07-24-2000).] |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
That was really good! Very descriptive. I can't say much else except that that was very good and I'm impressed-keep it up! Bel |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
A wonderful tribute at that to a dear friend! As astranged as Jeremy can seem, he has such a warm heart...Funny, I'm sooo many mile from the guy but he can make me smile when I'm crying and make me laugh when I'm upset. You are a very lucky girl Kristen! I hope everything works out with you two!! Nice writing...keep it up!  Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~ *~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Girl....you are too sweet!!! If I could cry right now, I swear to god I would. I eternaly thank you from the depths of my bottomless soul for this. You're so wonderful. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was such a beautiful and melodic verse Ceinwyn! Reads like a lovely lullibye itself. Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
I loved the comparison and the simile of the dragon. This was a most beautifull piece. Good enough to make me shed a tear. Jason  Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
i loved this poem!! it was so creative!! don't forget to stop by my poems and comment on them!! It is better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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