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sherm
Member

since 2000-07-21

Posts 94
Evansville,IN

0 posted 2000-07-22 03:27 AM

I wasnt looking for love
or anything at all
planned to stay a stone
to build up a wall

but there you were
putting a sparkle in my eye
you shined with something special
I noticed a new star up in the sky

it was brighter than all the rest
and glowed in a different way
it sparkled like no other
there was just nothing to say

then my wall fell down
and the rock turned to dust
theres nothing left of them
since i gave you all my love and trust

and I give them to you forever
to hold onto tight
I want to spend my life with you
every second of every day and night

i wrote this about my current girlfriend because we got together soon after i broke up with my ex(2 years together) and i was planning to stay alone but couldnt resist how great she was

cutie2005
Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA

1 posted 2000-07-22 11:17 AM

This was a very nice poem, and i really hope you and the new girl work out...!!! 2 years that is a long time, hope you can work out of it!!!
Love ya,
cutie

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-07-22 01:56 PM

this is a really good poem...whoever the girl is must be really special...keep up the good work and good luck with the girl...by the way do you mind if i copy it???

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

3 posted 2000-07-22 02:02 PM

Such a heartfelt poem Sherm! This girl must be very special! I hope everything works out for you two!! Keep up the wonderful work. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

sherm
Member

since 2000-07-21

Posts 94
Evansville,IN

4 posted 2000-07-23 02:19 AM

erin - sure, you can copy it

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

5 posted 2000-07-23 02:37 AM

Wow!!
Great poem, I hope that you let her read this, it must be so great to have someone in your life that you feel this strongly about, I hope you two stay together for a long time.

Love Always,
Shell.

Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
~Beautiful~
~Creed~

Lani_DarkOne
Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 152
UK

6 posted 2000-07-24 01:32 PM

Great poem...like your imagery, esp. the first verse, sounds just like me

Keep posting... a bit late..but Welcome to Passions..i haven't been here for a while.

"Controlling my feelings for too long....
And forcing our darkest souls to unfold...
And pushing us into self-destruction...."
*~Muse*~

Vball Chickie1624
Member

since 2000-05-14

Posts 116
New York

7 posted 2000-07-24 02:27 PM

hey...that was a beautiful poem...i love your poetry...keep writing and have fun!!

Love ya
Danielle

It takes a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like them, a day to love them, and a lifetime to forget them.
Dedicated to: MD

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

8 posted 2000-07-24 04:00 PM

Really cool poem, proves there are still guys out there who listen to their hearts! I hope someone will say those things about me sometime.

Peace dude.

*~Meredith~*

It's so obvious
That the promise
Keeps me here
Painting pictures where
All the colors
Disappear
*Lit

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

9 posted 2007-12-03 08:27 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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