Teen Poetry #3 |
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Broken Heart (title suggestion appreciated!) |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA ![]() |
Watching you around her seeing the sheer joy she brings to you makes me ill it suffocates me with nausea. Listening to you tallk about her and how much you lover her is like a thousand knieves harpooning into my heart and shreding it into micrscopic pieces But what do you care? you never cared, it was only an act and you played the award winning role You made me believe i was something you made me think i was important to you i thought you loved me But all these dreams and fanatsies were like a mirror A mirror that you took upon your self to shatter now you have her she has you and i have nothign but a broken heart< !signature--> The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle [This message has been edited by Jenabou (edited 07-22-2000).] |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
ok I have a few things to say here...1. this guy is just like every other guy looking to break a girl's heart. I know how you feel and can't tell you how sorry I am that your heart is so broken. 2. Your poem is wonderfully worded even on such a disheartening subject. 3. I've been in this exact situation, I found a way to stop hurting. I wouldn't say it is the right way, but I will say that I don't get hurt any more. I control the situation. I keep the guys falling for me, and when it comes to commiting, well I'm very very very skeptical. I have ensured that I will never get hurt again. I feel in love and got hurt, so now I'm never gonna get hurt again. But to you, I don't recommend this behavior. You need to get rid of this guy! He has donr nothing but give you un-necessary heart ache and I'm sure tears to go with it. But you are stonger than that and you deserve better. If he is willing to give you up for her, then you need to be willing to give him up for yourself!! I know it hurts! remember, I've been there. But as I always say, "Time in it's own essence can heal even the deepest of wounds--icluding the heart. Scars will remain, yes I know, and that's just the way it is. But with time, you'll be able to love again and be happy yet again." Please just keep that in mind! well I've babbled for quite some time now...Keep your head up and if you ever need to talk my e-mail address is: [email protected]. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ p.s. No guy is worth your tears, and the one who is, won't make you cry!!!! *~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
well what can i say...just that alot of guys are jerks...and this one guy is just a complete a$$hole...its wrong what they do to us girls...keep your head up...eventually you will find a good guy... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
thank you both so much for your wonderfull replies you have helped by jsut tlaking about it!! thanx again ~Jen~ ![]() The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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HerMelness Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 37Bridgewater, NS, Canada |
Jen... Damn girl.. It's so weird to see a poem from you on a website =) (Dont take this the wrong way anyone.. i know her in real life, instead of just cyberlife).. I like the poem, it reminds me of the ones I write. Theres nothing better than an entirely bitter poem. BUt hmm.. could I gues who this is about?! *widens eyes* -MEL- -Wherever you go, go with all your heart.- |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
hahahahaha mel sweet mel im sure you already know who its about!! but shhhhhhhh keep it on the DL!!! yeah bitterness is my specialtee! love ya! ~Jen~ ![]() The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
really good poem that guy sounds like a jerk i hope you have or will get over him he doesnt sound like hes worth being sad over |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey Jen, this an interesting poem. I know the feeling and it isn't exactly where I would like to have my life right now. I hope that everything goes well. Keep your head up. It well get better. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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mr0001 Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 39 |
very good poem...i haven't been on in so long, so i am trying to respond to the stuff i've missed. not all guys are like that..i've never met one who wasn't, but i'm sure they're not ALL like that. |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
very good poem!! just like a guy to do that!! loved it!! lol It is better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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